Vincent's a very likeable protagonist! If I won't so hooked up on FF8... maybe he would even be the first on my list.. Anywayz, that's beside the point. I've come across some that were plain one-dimensional, but you've fleshed him out enough to prevent that from happening. Awesome!

Yeah! Some action! Your description of martial arts moves never cease to amaze me. And the Shadow of Zen part was way cool...

Farrow's such a funny old guy. (I'm assuming the old part, or maybe I read it somewhere, can't remember.) OH... I think I've said that already, but it's such an understatement.

I'm guessing along the lines that Vincent is the supernatural power-enhanced killer? Hmm... just taking a wild stab in the dark.

Detailed Descriptions are just great, story flows nicely! Absolutely essential for a long story, which I think it is... more than thirty chapters already! Ah've got sum catchin' urp to do, Sir! An' that's mighty fine w' me!

WhiteMaiden

Hahaha... funny ending. Gruesome beginning, but this maiden's got a stomach made of steel, not to worry.

I'll read the subsequent chapters when my mind isn't in such a daze.

Oh before I forget, great chapter! Especially for Farrow's sarcasm hehehehe.

You deserve more reviews!

Hola!

Doing this at school so I can use reviews and the like (my computers still busted. But now I can finally get this story on my fave stories list!

So...a big dog attacking people, huh? Weird. But I like!

Coolies! Vincent sounds really cool and Kane sounds like a dick. However these people tie in with the murder is a mystery to me though. Can't wait to find out!

Savin

awsome story with many characters who are described well but dont make te chaps too long or peeps might get annoyed

Sounds like me in the morning, except for the sleeping in the nude and drinking coffee. Too cold to sleep in nude. And it is a pain in the ass to find a job. I'm currently still looking for one *gr* Anywho...me really like this story. I'm hooked!

Hey! Like the details and the characters. Pretty good so far. I'll read chapter two later. Excellent!

Very nice. Again I have found a character whose situation I sympathize with. Who needs consciousness? Sleep GOOD.

Much coolness! Well-written, descriptive but not disgusting on the part of the dead body, good description on other aspects of the story, and a nice insight to Farrow's feelings on the whole situation. I completely sympathize with his desire for coffee; I feel the same way about caffeinated soda during my first- and second-period classes at school.