he's definitely dead

Yardan...kick that bastard's ass! Yeah! ...anyway, this one was rather depressing but full of suspense (of not knowing what's gonna happen) and it makes me want to read more! Ah, but alas, this is the most recent chapter you have written...*cries*

...I never liked Essenon...and now I LOATHE him. How could he squeal like that? ...though I kinda feel sorry for him since he regretted telling. ;-;

Anyway, update soon please? (and school is sucky...just wanted to let you know that...)

O.O...very, very good...i need to know what happens next~! update soon. ~*~Netiri~*~

Ah, such tension! The emotion in this chapter is pretty intense. I do look forward to what happens next, and I like how you're taking your time and not rushing the plot.

This is all so awful! You'll just have to write the next chapter now, since I can't wait for it to come out.

Good luck with your writer's block and everything.

OH EFFING SHIT!

THE TWINS!

yes, it would be amusing.

...*music playing in the backgroung*...and let's all welcome Sir Osama Bin Laden!...Just kidding. that was my first taught when you mentioned his name...heheh.

ehehehehehe...heheh...silver pence? Lyris...*tututut*...

...DUNG DUNG DUNG DUNG..!

...reading...reading...near the end...BURST OUT LAUGHING...AHAHAHAHAAHHAHAHHAHAHAH...that was so funny it made my sides ache...terribly..really..that was really funny...good story by the way..who's he gonna fall for? if ever?

No! He can't die!

Well, of course he won't, but still... O_O ack!

Only a few more chapters, you say? I'm still waiting for Zamiral to see his brother again, and such things as that. But still... at least there's a sequel, eh?

_ Argh, and the plot thickens further. I've been waiting for the moment when Lyris would be discovered ever since I learnt that he was actually a spy, but this . . . I liked how you pulled the moment off, with Haroun's anxiety at learning how much the spymaster knew, and me wishing that he would actually knock Ruthiso out, or kill him in desperation, which he did, and then finding out it was actually useless in the end ;_; I wanted him to run to Lyris quite a few times but now I'm guessing that Lyris probably isn't tucked up safely in his room anymore. But at least Haroun's willingness to kill for his friend reveals his deeper emotions, if they ever come down to anything in the end.

Anyway, as previously mentioned by a couple of reviewers I also liked the contrast between the anxiety of Haroun and Lyris and the sweetness of Zamiral and Koichi. I also like how you didn't actually use the words but rather "those three words." It made it more secret and private somehow even though we all know what they said _~ Great update, keep it up!

Oh, wow. I'm sorry I found this story when it's almost over, but...wow. I love it. The light-hearted feeling of Zamiral and Koichi's situation contrasts well with Haroun and Lyris' dilemma. The suspense is well built, and I look forward to reading more.