Reviews for Hurt
Emma Forrest chapter 1 . 10/6/2002
Wow, this poem is repetitive in such a powerful way. I like the lines "This hurts./ no one said/ it would hurt." the best. They deliver that image of dying innnocence. The way that the last two lines almost rhyme is another part of the poem that I love. Also, I've never seen a question mark in a poem before. Great work! You write beautifully.

:-)emma
Hopes Forgotten chapter 1 . 10/4/2002
That's good .
Allyssa chapter 1 . 10/2/2002
Great poem.
Toad-Frog chapter 1 . 10/2/2002
Sad! But very well written! Check me out and keep writing!
Mywie chapter 1 . 10/2/2002
Wow... that's really excellent! The pacing is very dramatic and it all fits together nicely.