please continue.I hope the review isnt too late. hehe

Wow. Yea, I see why... Gosh, it's scary to think this happens. Keep writing!

*gasp* You can't just leave the story there like that! You have... 21 letters to go! Please keep writing!

I didn't really get that... what was the thing in the cafe? A bird? Anyway, it was nicely written. Keep going!

Wow. I really love your style of writing. Giving us fragments that seem to fit together so perfectly. It's really effective! Keep writing!

Oh... :'( Keep writing!

Scary and suspenseful... I could literally feel my heartbeat get louder and faster. Nice work! Keep writing!

Wow. Nice introduction. It's beautiful so far. I can only imagine what's coming... Keep writing!

Hi, ru! It's me. _

I love the way you present 'E'. As I read along, pictures just starts to flood in, overlapping one scene after the other. I had a gut feeling this was about the Iraq-USA war and SARS...and I was right. *meep*

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I don't know...the war maybe over but (so the government and media claims), but I think it's just beginning-both for the Iraqui people and the American government amongs themselves...

In SARS case, it won't be long now 'till they find a cure for it.

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Going back to the story, I say this is a good read. Though personally, I would find it more dramatic if you "paint the pictures" more vividly.

Good luck!

Heh heh, it's me, DiaBLo. Nik changed due to multiple nicks. :x Hmm, this chapter was longer, hehe. Better too. You portray your characters well. (Or have I said that already? XD)

Oh yeah, about SARS, 3 died here already... Singapore's so small, hope nobody else dies...

I say...

Another good one!

I sense your word flexibility. You're becoming diverse and more imaginative. It goes with picturing whats in your mind very well.

As for the peice itself: reflecive, touching, inspiring: as the good rurouni's works always are. Keep it up!

~ Shiroi Okami ~

ru! i missed you! ) hehe... so, how's school?

two thumbs up for this chapter :D the last part was very sad... i can almost imagine how horrible the girl's life would be afterwards. getting married, especially at a very young age and to someone you DON'T love is just too cruel.

Good one. Will be expecting more, soon. _

O.o

Aladin?

13? Woah..

Hmm..Reminds em a bit of the Joy Luck Club..

wait..I thinkk I'm mixed up..

haha! Yeah! Post up E soon!

I liked this chapter...very simple, but still thoughtful. As are all of your stories, really. Looking forward to the next as always,

Akal-Saris.