Reviews for Dark Night
Kormation chapter 1 . 10/15/2002
Its got rhyming, which I always like. Its not in any particular order but that's alright. I like it how you mention the planets (cause that's always cool). Talk about WHY the kids are scared, to make the poem a bit longer, or say something about the planets. This will capture the reader more. - Kormation
Pixiefox chapter 1 . 10/5/2002
hmm... very interesting