Reviews for Red Siren's Swivel
Rose Dark Thorn chapter 4 . 9/25/2003
Tis beautiful.
Rose Dark Thorn chapter 3 . 9/25/2003
Awesome. That's all I can say.
Rose Dark Thorn chapter 2 . 9/25/2003
This is cool. You see through eyes so dark it's not even black.
Rose Dark Thorn chapter 1 . 9/25/2003
That's kind of like me. I cut, but I really don't feel it except for a dull sting. I do it to see the blood.
Inoperative chapter 4 . 8/9/2003
hmm, described it marvellously (yeah i know i probably spelt that wrong) there's something eerie and mysterious and really cool about candles...
Inoperative chapter 3 . 8/9/2003
yes, it does...

i just finished watching spy kids 2...pretty cool movie... you know... well i've spent the whole weekend procrastinating, while you're on a biv.. wonderful no? i should be doing my assignments or my debate, know, i thought what better way to refine my skills of procrastination...

we have to go bouldering next weekend...yep, we sure do...

now onto the poem, which was oringinally why i came into this little was-once blank white box (in case you had any doubts) yes..i loved was good...
Inoperative chapter 2 . 8/9/2003
i didn't know there was more than one chapter...thanks for telling me..pfft :D i've decided that i like this one, you know for a change...
Theveirge chapter 1 . 3/27/2003
thank you for writing about why people cut. a lot of people write about cutting but not why it's done. or when they do, they always leave it at blood. but it's more then that. it's letting the emotional pain slip away, isn't it?

The Crazy Cricket chapter 1 . 3/5/2003
You're right. This isn't bedtime story material. But it *is* a good poem. It voices a lot of the reasons why, I hear, people hurt themselves. _ I like!
Jade chapter 1 . 10/16/2002
This is really REALLY good! I liked the meaning behind it... it is so much more easy to cut then be cut... that was a corny review but I hope you will forgive... I am sorry I have not been reviewing lately but I have been so busy and now that I am no longer posting at I don't have much of a reason to go there... but I promise to check out your stuff when ever I have the time because you have a ton of potential and I hope you realize that!

Take Care

Glowing Embers chapter 1 . 10/15/2002
very good. this i like alot ] it took me forever to find you again! this new pen name of your's is pretty cool though...

~Glowing Embers
Hopes Forgotten chapter 1 . 10/4/2002
Wow, that's really good D
lighted eagle chapter 1 . 10/4/2002
omg, omg, i like it, i like it, I LIKE IT! no i mean it really like that one! that woz really i mean really good...very great...and i'm still awed over how good that poem woz to leave a normal review (sorri bout that) but no seriously dude, this poem just one of your bests! good job!