Reviews for glass
Ralleigen chapter 1 . 4/22/2006
Rather sad. I liked it, but then I didn't. When you said "Stained strawberry", it's good, but not befitting. It deals with death, and strawberry is not really associated with death. Crimson may have been a better word, for example. Just my thoughts.
LeeTheProtector chapter 1 . 11/5/2003
Hmm... a little rusty, you repeated a few words and that sometimes shows out to be bad in poetry. If you repeat alomst in every line, it gets a little hard to read and the reader gets bored. Try to take more thought and detail, it helps. No flame, just happy advice. Love your work and I'm a huge fan. Keep it up. )