This is my first poem ever that I ever posted... I don't think that my other ones are that good... please review after reading this! I would like to know if I should put up more. Thanks! Oh- added a few more stanzas. Review please!



Falling




Every tear has a story

screaming and yelling

your thoughts as it runs

down your face-

lost forever

in the thick mass

of depression...



No one knows it's true feeling,

except you-



Your thoughts are all scrambled

each one pushing itself

to the surface of your mind...

trying to be heard

or at least

be seen...



...Falling and swirling...

with no one to catch you-

only the tears

at the bottom

of your consciousness.