This is my first poem on FF.net, so please be kind. Thanx^^
Disclaimer: I own this poem, of course.
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Carnival Nights
School, parents, life
Bumper cars
Jostling, jolting, shoving
Blue blends with red
Only streams of light visible
Motion sickness consumes me now
Staring into twisted glass
Distorted monster within me revealed
Exit now; slide into oblivion
A Ferris Wheel spins
Restless passengers
Longing for a ride through my mind
Take a chance
Pay the price
Win a prize?
I think I'll take a trip to the fair.
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Review if you feel up to it.
Disclaimer: I own this poem, of course.
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Carnival Nights
School, parents, life
Bumper cars
Jostling, jolting, shoving
Blue blends with red
Only streams of light visible
Motion sickness consumes me now
Staring into twisted glass
Distorted monster within me revealed
Exit now; slide into oblivion
A Ferris Wheel spins
Restless passengers
Longing for a ride through my mind
Take a chance
Pay the price
Win a prize?
I think I'll take a trip to the fair.
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Review if you feel up to it.