Okay, my first fic on fanfictionpress.net. It's a poem, as you know, and therefore pretty short. It's a vision of how the world comes to an end. It's built off a biblical one that you can read in the book of Revelations, or the 'Left Behind' series. Keep in mind; it's mostly just things to symbolize what could happen. Tell me what you think.

Tears fell like rain, onto tossed and broken land.

Shadows on the walls tested and taunted.

Love and peace went up in flame in the distance.

Some sobbed.

Others didn't see anything different.

The Earth fell into darkness.

Some still saw no difference.

Some had never known light, so what to contrast?