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Now the barriers are growing wider,

And the walls are closing in,

While the noose is growing tighter,

Around innocent necks in this world of sin.
Now the wind is growing colder,

As autumn's sun gives way to ice,

And each heart is growing older,

Every beat fading, and never beating twice.
Now the days are growing longer,

And there are no tears left to cry,

But my heart will grow no stronger,

I try to weep; my eyes are dry.
Now that life seems to have no meaning,

And death seems like a welcome release,

And all we had we have no chance of redeeming,

No chance of happiness, no chance of peace.