To Som: Thank you for reviewing my first poem!  I really appreciated your kindness in doing so. Your motivation had made me decided to continue (even though I am still not that good in writing) whenever inspiration had hit my head. Because I knew, even when nobody wanted to read my lousy work, there is always SOM to let me know she is reading! ^_^

AN ORDEAL

Found myself in total darkness

Felt my partners piled above me

For what reason was they cold and intact

For what reason I was the only survivor

My instinct told me to wriggle my way up

No matter how disrespectful I had to be

Using them as my stepping stones

Up, up and above was where I headed

Until the first trace of light shone on me

Found myself in total brightness

Felt my partners stacked below me

For what reason was they cold and intact

For what reason I was the only survivor

My instinct told me to find my way back

No matter how pessimistic I had to be

With no more chemical trace to lead me on

North South East West were the directions I've wandered

Only to find myself back to where I've started

North South East West were the directions I've wandered again

That was an ordeal I've to accept

To be the only survivor in this massacre