Here is a poem I wrote earlier today. I don't know if it's good or bad..it just kinda came out of nowhere. Anywayz..please read it and give me your honest opinion. I'm not a poet or anything, I just wanted to see what people thought of it.

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The Immortal

I am immortal..wise and fair

I live forever..here and there

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I whisper to you..as you sleep

All your secrets..I will keep

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I watch over you..night and day

I listen to you..when you sing and say

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I paint the stars..up in the sky

I am the immortal..your soul's spirit and mind.

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