ok--I admit, it's not really a haiku...or even a cut haiku. But the syllabic meter (?) at least starts out 1-2-3-4-5-5-4-3-2-1, or something like that....anyways. I just thought it would fit better here. Read and leave me a review!
Rated: Fiction K - English - Words: 37 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 5/11/2003 - id: 1300551
on my open face;
or are they teardrops?
These liquid spheres
Wish you'd come
Back; come dry
I know you'll
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