This is actually a longer form of one of the haikus I wrote. I just felt like writing it. ^^ Please r/r, constructive criticism appreciated..

Forsaken

Look towards the sky and the sea,

          There is no horizon.

Empty nothingness;

               This is my sanctuary.

The world is falling apart

          All around,

The warm, bright sun

               Slowly fades to dark.

Struggling in the starless, moonless night,

          I stumble upon the Pale Horse.

As lightning comes to strike,

               All is forgotten.