Okay everyone. This one is the second new poem that I wrote for my Creative Writing Course that I am taking. I hope you enjoy. Please dont forget to review. They're my lifelines!

~Relena Peace

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"The Black Bird's Hunt"

The black bird's eyes are watchful, never blinking.
Ink black and tiney he hops back and fourth.

His mind inquisitive, his talons sharp. He hunts his prey.
The black bird sniffs the air, fresh mice just below.

He releases his soft but stirdy wings and circles the rodent.
Plunging suddenly and deep he attacks.

A swift movement, a neck snaps. Blood spills, fleash tares.
The stench of raw blood and guts fill the air.

The preditor eats content and happy.
Satisfied with his meal he returns to his pearch, full.

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The interesting story behind this one is that I wrote it and turned it in for a one of my friends (Velda, yes you remember). ^^;; It was her birthday and she had asked me to do her Creative Writing homework for her. If it would have taken me more than a minute to write it I would have said no. But I whipped it out real quick. Again, like the other one I don't know what the grade was on it. I hope she got a good grade from this poem too. After all, I'm the one who wrote it. LoL. ^.^" Well, please review now peoples!

Love,

~Relena Peace