Lone Shadow:Hello!I'm new to original fiction...so please be kind with the flames you'll most likely send me.I hope you like it.Here it is.The Age of Samurai!!!
Chapter 1:Training
Out in a grassy plain a group chicken loudly cluck as the sun rises that echos around the mountainus town of Earomme as the 'hero' of are story is still snoring away.
"GET UP YOU LAZY BOY!"a middle aged woman yelled into the boy's ear.She stood there with chestnut hair and a long blue dress.
"Five more minutes Elana"the young boy said sleeply still in laying in his bed covered up.
"That's mother to you Daedonda"Elana snapped annoyed"NOW GET OUT IF THAT BED!"
"You arn't my mom"he sighed getting out of bed rubbing his eyes"My mom is gone....you know that"
"Yes I know"she looked at the ground"She is my sister you know....but at least call me Aunt Elana ok?"
"Alright aunt Elana"he smiled as he picked out his cloughs"Now I gotta get dressed so could you please leave?"
"Ok kid"he smiled and walked out of he room and looked to a tall old man with large armor on him drinking tea"What are you doing father?"
"Daedonda is at the right age now Elana"the old man grumbled"He has to learn the way-"
"Of the samurai"She cut him off"Yes we know but he's only 15 father shouldn't we wait till he's older?"
"YES!TODAY I START TRAINING!!!"Daedonda shouted as he bolted out of his room dressed in white samurai pants and a loose black shirt"When do I get my sword gramps?"he asked eagerly.
"That's honorable grandfather to you"Elana said to him"And you arn't starting today because-"
"Leave the boy alone Elana"Gramps ordered"He is starting today along with all the other boys and that's final!"he got up from his seat and tossed Daedonda a wooden sword and some leather plated armor"This is what you start with.Hurry and eat your breakfest and meet me and the other boys at the Great Holy Tree in the middle of town"
"Yes sir!"he sat down at his seat and ate his breakfest and almost choked on it several times"Ow damn it"he spit out a fish bone after choking for the tenth time.
"Watch your language!"Elana scolded Daedonda"It's bad enough you're trianing at such a young age!Now you're breaking rules!?"
"So what?"he asked with a snotty tone"I'm done now time to become a samurai see ya tonight Elana"he darted out of the house toword the Great Holy Tree.
"THAT'S AUNT ELANA!"he shouted after him as he left she sat down and sighed"That boy has been so bad sence Cylla died"
On the way to the Great Holy Tree Daedonda runs into a larger boy wearing rags and carring a short sword"Damn it Suka"Daedonda shouted as he rubbed his head and got up
"You should watch what you're goin small fry"he snorted swinging his blade around"Like it?It's better then that firewood you got on your belt"he laughed as two kids came behind Daedonda and laughed with Suka ready to beat up Daedonda if their leader asked him to.
"Firewood?"he laughed at him"This is made of one of the Great Holy Tree's branches!This is a great starting weapon"
"HA!Wanna fight me and see?"he took an offancive stance"BRING IT!"
"No problem Suka.I'll fight you...I have 5 minutes before I gotta get to the tree"he drew his sword and charged him.
"Come on!Try and hit me!"he swung his blade and almost made contact with the younger boy but he was pulled back by Gramps
"HEY!"Daedonda shouted as the old man picked him up and threw him over his sholder"I was about to beat Suka!"
"No, not yet."Gramps said calmly"Neither of you have the trianing.Now come with me boys it's time for trianing"
"YES SIR!"the four boys yelled in unison.They walked after gramps to get ready to become warriors.
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Lone Shadow:I suppose I'll leave it at that....this is just an intro chapter and next time (if there is one) I'll write a longer chapter!Please review!
Chapter 1:Training
Out in a grassy plain a group chicken loudly cluck as the sun rises that echos around the mountainus town of Earomme as the 'hero' of are story is still snoring away.
"GET UP YOU LAZY BOY!"a middle aged woman yelled into the boy's ear.She stood there with chestnut hair and a long blue dress.
"Five more minutes Elana"the young boy said sleeply still in laying in his bed covered up.
"That's mother to you Daedonda"Elana snapped annoyed"NOW GET OUT IF THAT BED!"
"You arn't my mom"he sighed getting out of bed rubbing his eyes"My mom is gone....you know that"
"Yes I know"she looked at the ground"She is my sister you know....but at least call me Aunt Elana ok?"
"Alright aunt Elana"he smiled as he picked out his cloughs"Now I gotta get dressed so could you please leave?"
"Ok kid"he smiled and walked out of he room and looked to a tall old man with large armor on him drinking tea"What are you doing father?"
"Daedonda is at the right age now Elana"the old man grumbled"He has to learn the way-"
"Of the samurai"She cut him off"Yes we know but he's only 15 father shouldn't we wait till he's older?"
"YES!TODAY I START TRAINING!!!"Daedonda shouted as he bolted out of his room dressed in white samurai pants and a loose black shirt"When do I get my sword gramps?"he asked eagerly.
"That's honorable grandfather to you"Elana said to him"And you arn't starting today because-"
"Leave the boy alone Elana"Gramps ordered"He is starting today along with all the other boys and that's final!"he got up from his seat and tossed Daedonda a wooden sword and some leather plated armor"This is what you start with.Hurry and eat your breakfest and meet me and the other boys at the Great Holy Tree in the middle of town"
"Yes sir!"he sat down at his seat and ate his breakfest and almost choked on it several times"Ow damn it"he spit out a fish bone after choking for the tenth time.
"Watch your language!"Elana scolded Daedonda"It's bad enough you're trianing at such a young age!Now you're breaking rules!?"
"So what?"he asked with a snotty tone"I'm done now time to become a samurai see ya tonight Elana"he darted out of the house toword the Great Holy Tree.
"THAT'S AUNT ELANA!"he shouted after him as he left she sat down and sighed"That boy has been so bad sence Cylla died"
On the way to the Great Holy Tree Daedonda runs into a larger boy wearing rags and carring a short sword"Damn it Suka"Daedonda shouted as he rubbed his head and got up
"You should watch what you're goin small fry"he snorted swinging his blade around"Like it?It's better then that firewood you got on your belt"he laughed as two kids came behind Daedonda and laughed with Suka ready to beat up Daedonda if their leader asked him to.
"Firewood?"he laughed at him"This is made of one of the Great Holy Tree's branches!This is a great starting weapon"
"HA!Wanna fight me and see?"he took an offancive stance"BRING IT!"
"No problem Suka.I'll fight you...I have 5 minutes before I gotta get to the tree"he drew his sword and charged him.
"Come on!Try and hit me!"he swung his blade and almost made contact with the younger boy but he was pulled back by Gramps
"HEY!"Daedonda shouted as the old man picked him up and threw him over his sholder"I was about to beat Suka!"
"No, not yet."Gramps said calmly"Neither of you have the trianing.Now come with me boys it's time for trianing"
"YES SIR!"the four boys yelled in unison.They walked after gramps to get ready to become warriors.
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Lone Shadow:I suppose I'll leave it at that....this is just an intro chapter and next time (if there is one) I'll write a longer chapter!Please review!