A/N:
before you read anything I'd just like to say how
exactly you work this particular chapter. There are different ways you can read
it…
a. read it as you would a normal poem – and you'll get the contrast.
b. read the non italicized phrases ONLY but include the very very very last italicized line.
c. make sure you don't read ONLY the italicized, my
ingenuity can only go so far.
I'd
like to run away
From you,
But if you didn't come and find me…
I would die
~ Shirley Bassey
Extended Lufians – Chapter 7: Victim
This night, this day, this twilight
I love you
Recite your sins within my eyes
I'll still love you
And sew your apologies in this barren ground
I'll savour your every word
Your power, our look, your kiss
I breathe
Deepens my grave with its addictive impact
My longing for our next moment
Its sweet sweet impact
That addictive impact
Dreaming of liberty leaves me shattered
I'd die without you
For my reality was born of the unforgiving
My heart would drown my days
And as beautiful as the distance looks
Your beauty will never fade
Your effect will never fade
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Right ok, decided to experiment a little with this quote, go with the whole
contrast. I'll be interested to see what certain reviewers have to say, 'twill
be intriguing. I'd also like to apologise for the disgustingly late update, I'm
disgusting, I know. Ok, more about the poem, the lines not italicized are the
part of the person that realises the relationship isn't good for them and they
want to let go…you might see a slight progression of realisation. The italicized
sentences are basically just how much the persons loves
their partner…the other side. You can really look into it as much as you like, I
left it open for interpretation; apply to it what you like! Thankyou for
reading and thanks to all who review/reviewed! Muchly
appreciated.