Hello all!!

Yes, I have finally decided to load another story, and as you'll probably notice, I already have a good bit of this up...how is this possible, you ask? Well, it's because I finished this story over a year ago.

There's only one problem with this, I have absolutely no time to edit a story that's over 400 pages, and really I've only ever read it all the way through once..oh, and another thing, my spelling is going to be horrendus (as well as my grammar) because manually spell checking a document this size takes hours, and this story is on my old computer which doesn't have automatic spell check, so concider this your warning and your apology from me.

Normally I'd have stuff like this in better condition before I put it up, but I figured it's a decent story in itself, even if I am a bit redundant in places. That, and I knew that if I didn't post it now, I never would.

So with that in mind, I hope you can see through all the issues to the story beneath, though, for it is actually fairly decent, and is simply a part one. Oh, and the scale still applies to this story, too. For those of you who have no idea what I'm talking about, here's the scale again:

0 I couldn't even finish it, it was so bad!

1 Why the heck did you waste my time with this? Why did you even bother writing it, for that matter? THIS BE NO GOOD!!

2 you're lucky, had you done any worse, it would have ended up with yesterdays newspapers

3 bad writing, bad plot, but I was addicted anyway...why???

4 a bit below average

5 just as good as every other person's I've ever read....

6 better than the average

7 not bad, but I've read better

8 I'm pleasantly surprised on how good it was

9 wow, that was great! Not top ten, but hey, not many get up there...

10 a publisher would take it and publish it

11 addicting...where's the rest of it??? GIVE IT TO ME NOW!!

Well, in any case, I hope you guys like this story, it certainly was a very big part of my life for over a year, and I hope that comes through. :)