Okay this is my first original. Story anyone ever going to read. Don't go
easy on me. Give your true thoughts, and feeling on this. Don't be afraid
to tell me the truth. I want criticism too! Well enjoy.
Intro: I've been having these weird thoughts. Been having them for a long time now. I can never understand what they mean. But I know they do mean something. Something big.
Chapter 1
You see these thoughts started along time ago. The end of my freshman year. I think. I would hear my name or flapping, or whispers in my ear. I'd have random twitches or odd surges in my boy. I thought I was crazy. Now I wish I was.
I'll start from what I like to call my trigger point. Where I started to fall him. Hard.
"Alyssa!" I screamed. Doing a full force tackle at my friend. " Oh god. I'm gonna miss you so much." I said. Helping her up and giving her a hug. It was the last day of freshman year. I wasn't going to see my friends go a while.
" I know. I love you, girl." She said pretending to cry. We hugged again. I thin went to say good- bye to Ellis. He was one of my closer guy friends. Like my brother. Not my man.
Then heard him. The man who I claimed to have known for two years. Darin Meyano.
" Hey Kayana." He said in his cool suave voice. I turned around with a smile.
"Hello Darin." I said. " I gotta get a hug from you." He smiled and opened his arms to me. I stepped into his warm. Embrace. Then it happened. It was like my kidneys caught fire and it was spreading quickly through my body. The flapping was back, and stronger than ever. I was doing all I could to keeping from twitching, and the overlapping whispers were driving me crazy.
We let go of each other. He smiled at me. I gave my best forced smiled. What just happened had scared me. But it seemed like it was gone now so I let it go.
Walking down the hallway with Alyssa, I heard it though. The softest and almost inaudible voice. Almost. Kayana.
I ignored it though. Not a smart thing to do. Cause I heard it again. Louder. The loudest and sharpest it had ever been. Kayana!
I dropped like a ton of bricks. As all went dark.
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I felt a hand in my hand. I looked over to see Alyssa. Ellis was a bit behind her. "Hey girl." She whispered. You could she tears of happiness in her eyes. "You gave us quite a scare in that hallway. You okay?"
I looked at like she was crazy. "What are you talking about?" I asked.
"What is she talking about?" Ellis said. He sounded really pissed. "She's talking about how you dropped like a fucking rock in the school hallway."
"Come down Ellis." Alyssa hissed. Then she turned to me. "Don't you remember what happened?"
I closed my eyes and thought about. "I remember a light. A red light. And dripping, a loud dripping noise." I said. " That's it. Sorry."
She looked at me worriedly. Then put on a fake smile. "That's alright. I'm sure you remember later. Now are you sure your okay?"
I smiled. " Alyssa stop worrying so much. I'm fine."
"Yeah well some one else is here to make sure of that." Ellis said with a smirk.
"Oh, no. It's the smirk. Who is it.Ellis you didn't invite Darin to come see me like this did you?!"
Ellis looked at me and laughed. " Invite. Hell no. The boy wouldn't take no for an answer. So stop yelling."
I glared daggers at him. I'd kill him later for this. Then I heard the door open and close. I turned around.
" Hi Darin." I said shyly. I ashamed for him to see me in this predicament.
"Hey Kayana." He said. He had a smile on his face but he looked just as worried as Ellis and Alyssa did. Then I heard Alyssa clear her throat.
"Well, I think it's time me and Ellis took a short break. Now that you're here Darin, you can watch her. Okay thanks, tootles." She said shouted over her shoulder as she pulled Ellis out of the door.
I rolled my eyes. Darin just smiled and said. "Crazy aren't they?"
I shook my head. "No their just total retards." He laughed at that. I laughed as well and sat up. Then I heard again. Kayana!!!!! I felt like I was really losing it now.
"What!!!!?!!!!" I screamed at the top of lungs. " What do you want from me?!!"
Darin looked surprised. " I came to see you. Why what's the matter?" he asked. Kayana.I'm coming.
Alyssa and Ellis came running in. "What!? What is it?! What happened?!" She screamed at Darin. Kayana.
"SHUT UP!!!!" I screamed. Kayana!
"That's it! We have to go we can't stay here any longer! She's going to lose it!" I heard one of them yell. But with in moment I heard nothing and everything was dark again.
Well there it is. The end of the first chapter. Tell me what you think please. I need reviews. Please just tell if you like it or not. Well going to go now. Bye!
Intro: I've been having these weird thoughts. Been having them for a long time now. I can never understand what they mean. But I know they do mean something. Something big.
Chapter 1
You see these thoughts started along time ago. The end of my freshman year. I think. I would hear my name or flapping, or whispers in my ear. I'd have random twitches or odd surges in my boy. I thought I was crazy. Now I wish I was.
I'll start from what I like to call my trigger point. Where I started to fall him. Hard.
"Alyssa!" I screamed. Doing a full force tackle at my friend. " Oh god. I'm gonna miss you so much." I said. Helping her up and giving her a hug. It was the last day of freshman year. I wasn't going to see my friends go a while.
" I know. I love you, girl." She said pretending to cry. We hugged again. I thin went to say good- bye to Ellis. He was one of my closer guy friends. Like my brother. Not my man.
Then heard him. The man who I claimed to have known for two years. Darin Meyano.
" Hey Kayana." He said in his cool suave voice. I turned around with a smile.
"Hello Darin." I said. " I gotta get a hug from you." He smiled and opened his arms to me. I stepped into his warm. Embrace. Then it happened. It was like my kidneys caught fire and it was spreading quickly through my body. The flapping was back, and stronger than ever. I was doing all I could to keeping from twitching, and the overlapping whispers were driving me crazy.
We let go of each other. He smiled at me. I gave my best forced smiled. What just happened had scared me. But it seemed like it was gone now so I let it go.
Walking down the hallway with Alyssa, I heard it though. The softest and almost inaudible voice. Almost. Kayana.
I ignored it though. Not a smart thing to do. Cause I heard it again. Louder. The loudest and sharpest it had ever been. Kayana!
I dropped like a ton of bricks. As all went dark.
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I felt a hand in my hand. I looked over to see Alyssa. Ellis was a bit behind her. "Hey girl." She whispered. You could she tears of happiness in her eyes. "You gave us quite a scare in that hallway. You okay?"
I looked at like she was crazy. "What are you talking about?" I asked.
"What is she talking about?" Ellis said. He sounded really pissed. "She's talking about how you dropped like a fucking rock in the school hallway."
"Come down Ellis." Alyssa hissed. Then she turned to me. "Don't you remember what happened?"
I closed my eyes and thought about. "I remember a light. A red light. And dripping, a loud dripping noise." I said. " That's it. Sorry."
She looked at me worriedly. Then put on a fake smile. "That's alright. I'm sure you remember later. Now are you sure your okay?"
I smiled. " Alyssa stop worrying so much. I'm fine."
"Yeah well some one else is here to make sure of that." Ellis said with a smirk.
"Oh, no. It's the smirk. Who is it.Ellis you didn't invite Darin to come see me like this did you?!"
Ellis looked at me and laughed. " Invite. Hell no. The boy wouldn't take no for an answer. So stop yelling."
I glared daggers at him. I'd kill him later for this. Then I heard the door open and close. I turned around.
" Hi Darin." I said shyly. I ashamed for him to see me in this predicament.
"Hey Kayana." He said. He had a smile on his face but he looked just as worried as Ellis and Alyssa did. Then I heard Alyssa clear her throat.
"Well, I think it's time me and Ellis took a short break. Now that you're here Darin, you can watch her. Okay thanks, tootles." She said shouted over her shoulder as she pulled Ellis out of the door.
I rolled my eyes. Darin just smiled and said. "Crazy aren't they?"
I shook my head. "No their just total retards." He laughed at that. I laughed as well and sat up. Then I heard again. Kayana!!!!! I felt like I was really losing it now.
"What!!!!?!!!!" I screamed at the top of lungs. " What do you want from me?!!"
Darin looked surprised. " I came to see you. Why what's the matter?" he asked. Kayana.I'm coming.
Alyssa and Ellis came running in. "What!? What is it?! What happened?!" She screamed at Darin. Kayana.
"SHUT UP!!!!" I screamed. Kayana!
"That's it! We have to go we can't stay here any longer! She's going to lose it!" I heard one of them yell. But with in moment I heard nothing and everything was dark again.
Well there it is. The end of the first chapter. Tell me what you think please. I need reviews. Please just tell if you like it or not. Well going to go now. Bye!