So, instead of writing Breaking Point the prequel. I've decided to just rewrite this story and combine within it the story of how Blake and Kris met and how their relationship developed. Anyway…. If anyone wants to check it out and comment or tell me if I'm screwing it up, that would be awesome. So far I have a couple chapters posted on the new title of Broken V2. I hate to remove this version of it, but I may if I think the new one's significantly better. Point is, I would love some feedback, you guys were amazing for inspiring me to finish this version in the first place. I could certainly use your advice on the new one. Thanks!