I know i said i would fix this and if it didn't help then i would discontinue...well ok...let's just say i haven't gotten around to fixing it yet..but i have something really good for this..and i think u pple that have read it will like it i mean theres a bit of a plot twist i think...and i liked what i had in store..i'm just having problems developing and getting back into my grove of somewhat writing ok...if that makes sense..so don't give up on it i guess is the advice i give to u peeps that read it...i will try real hard to fix it and get my ideas in order soon...