I'm sorry if you were one of the people who loved this story exactly how it was. For the most part, it remains unchanged. If you've already read this, I wouldn't advise re-reading it for the revisions since it's so similar. I changed it to satisfy my standards and to make it an overall easier read. Thank you for all the wonderful people who reviewed this story. Please don't be offended because I'm removing my review responses.

-stroke