This is my first poem I have written for the site, its kinda weird and all, but it you could review, it would be great!

Moonlit shadows
Dance across the ground
Silent with serenity
Making not a sound

Ever so graceful
Like whirling wind
Sing your melodic song
Until our end

A ring of fire
Made of tears
New in motion
Ancient in years

Spin away
To and fro
Perhaps alive
We'll never know

Keep on dancing
Keep on singing
In our ears
Your melodies ringing

Whistle your tune
Shadows prancing
Whistle your tune
Shadows dancing

Listen to our words
Hear our mournful cry
Lift us on wing
Help us to fly

Into the skies
We joyfully soar
Happily singing
Yet silent once more