Your scathing sarcasm drips

Cruelly from your lips,

You toss it out with no thought

Of what you are saying

-Or maybe it's a little

Too much thought-

Not caring that others are hurt

Perhaps not noticing,

-Yet somehow, seeing it

All too well.-

Your words,

The purpose of which are only

To sting and hurt,

Do their job well,

It seems,

As I find myself bleeding inside,

Just as you had wanted

Me to be.

Again, sorry for the weirdness. Gah. Anyway, please review! I welcome all feedback (except flames, which i will send you a nasty email about, because truthfully, its cruel. if you have advice, or whats it called? i cant remember, as my mind is currently dead-no comments, its 10:00 pm and i've been workign on homework/schoolwork since 7:00 am. gah. CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISISM! yay! go me! I would do pookies happy dance, but i dont do that....anyway, yeah. if its not constructive, then leave it alone. if you can not find an aspect to improve on (which i'm sure you can find millions of, so you should have plenty to work off of) then dont bother critsizing. okay? yeah, and i'm ranting, or blabbering, or whatever. thats what happens when my brain goes dead (when i'm tired, i mean.) so, anyway, goodnight! gah, this was long!)