Just something I wrote last year a few of my friends coaxed me into posting. Tell me what you think.

The City

The city of Seaport was like any other corrupt city, it exiled its malicious criminals to jail and taunted them. The businessmen swaggered to and from their jobs jubilantly and full of egotism. Those in the middle class ambled to their sufficient jobs to be barraged by insults from the businessmen; the destitute however plodded through the alleys of the monumental skyscrapers picking mutilated pieces of bread from dumpsters. One day though a torrent of rain sprang onto the town; when it was over a thick fog covered the town, shrill cries could be heard everywhere, people tried to coax the fog out of their houses to no avail, when the fog lifted, the city was gone.