I need some new socks. Preferably blue ones. Oh yeah... the poem, please review

This is a fake improvement

On what we used to be

Twirling circles

It's hard to see

The lines they separate

Between you and me

It's crashing down

I cannot breathe...

You know you want to review, I can see it in your eyes ! Well, not literally cause thats just creepy and strange, anyway, what I'm asking is that you just click that little 'Go' button... come on !