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Do you want to hear a story? It's not one of fame or even of a happy ending. It was no knights and no kings. There is no princess and no prince, but it is one of love. It starts before I was even born with a man named Kyosh and a woman named Raquel. They meet under strange conditions. Kyosh is from a tribe of people called dragons. Now I know what your thinking, "Dragon? Does that mean he turns into a dragon?" No, no he doesn't, he just has magic powers and has a longer life span then normal people. He's tribe also has the ability to jump dimensions. That is an important fact in this story because they are from two completely different worlds. Raquel is from a small island named Velga. She is the daughter of the head of the village of Nalka, which is located in the middle of the island. These two people meet at a very young age. And from that meeting they where destined to be with one anther or so it was said.

So lets start our story as we take a trip to the past. It's High noon in one of the forests on Velga. A small girl with long braided brown hair and large brown eyes named Raquel is standing with a basket on the ground in front of her and fruits all around her. She is staring at the little boy who is looking at one of the herbs they use for medicine in her village, but the fact that he is looking at the herb is not what she is surprised at, it's the way her looks. He is about four feet six inches tall. He was golden blonde hair that falls around his shoulders and emerald green eyes, but this again is not her surprise, it's his ears. He has pointed ears with an earring that hangs and dangles in the sun that is coming through the trees. The little boy looks at her after about a minute and smiles very kindly at her. Raquel smiles back then asks, "What are you doing?" The little boy turns and walks toward her. She steps back as he draws near, "Who are you?" the little boy stops and picks up the basket and hands in to her. Suddenly all the fruit is in the basket. He smiles again at her. After a moment she takes the basket still staring at him she asks, "Are you some kind of god? Because if you are you are very small for one." The little boy suddenly looks taken back by what she has said and laughs. She smiles slightly, " Of course your not a god. After all why would a god come down to look at plants? They wouldn't that's why." The little boy smiles again as he turns around and picks the herb he had been looking at. He turns back to her again and says, " Name is Kyosh." Raquel repeats the name without meaning to. Kyosh smiles again, " That's right. Now what's yours?" She blinks, "Raquel. My name is Raquel" Kyosh smiles and says, " It was nice to meet you Raquel." Then he turns and walks off into the forest. Raquel blinks as he goes then runs after him "Wait", but after about a minute or so she stopped running and noticed he had totally disappeared. Raquel then made her way back to her village to give her mother the fruit she had picked before meeting the very strange boy. Kyosh having teleported out of the dimension after leaving Raquel made his way back to his home where his father was waiting for the herb he had gotten to help his sister sickness.