Rays of Perfection

Rays of light, the clear eyes that see my soul,

Glinting off willow tree leaves, a calm breeze.

Beneath your fiery demeanor, inner turmoil,

Simmering under the surface.

Let me love you.

Passions rise with the sun,

Inflamed with sweet longing.

Before we met my life was just a storm,

You lifted me above the clouds,

Higher than the stars.

Let me love you.

Now, you just a shadow of your former self.

My human arms can't reach around you,

Smothering, water douses the flames.

Suffocating on the sultry smoke,

Gone with the ashes of my life.

a/n: please review! I'll do the same for your poem.umm.. yes, about the poem, it was kind of a last minute thing, but i like it so please review, and tell me what you think! no flames please. arrghh stupid thing won't let me put a line/spacey thing between the last line of the poem and my a/n ... grrr