Crashing across the windblown asters
Cold fingertips of fear running down his spine
Grasses slithering, swiping at his ankles
Fingers rigid with the memory of
Leaving his tie round her neck
Doing a crazed dance of guilt, panic
Until that moonshine-scented wind blew him
Off the edge.
"Till death do us part", he'd said
While pearly intoxication whirled around him
If only he'd known.
All he heard was the rip-roaring tide.
(And there Carrie lay
In her coffin of waving prairie grasses
Blushing a beautiful blue up
At the summer night sky)
A/N: Don't you just love the word "prairie"? I do!! Haha.
Anyways, I'm not too sure about this…I think there are too many breaks. Does anyone need me to explain what happened here? I know it's pretty vague…
Constructive criticism would be very much welcome!:)