Random poems by Jane Angel, please review on them, I always love to know what others think about them.

Beast

my love,
on a night such as this
I will come for thee.
when the moon shines her ghostly light on this world
I will come.
For you only, my love,
can save me
from the beast
I will become.
on a night such as this,
I will lose all hope,
and I shall no long be man but a beast,
with no mind and no heart to know the right from the wrong.
but one soft brush of you sweet red lips on my sinful ones
shall make me a man again.
so please my love tell you must promise you'll be there.
for on a night such as this,
I shall come for thee,
my love

Your Space

This is one of my old poems I just changed it up a bit, please tell me what you think

while I sit here in you Space,
I try to mend my broken heart
holding back the tears
from the fear of knowing
you'll never come back,
how could you just go
and leave me in this empty place?
I'm so alone now
I'm here and your no where near.
every night I fear to dream
knowing I'll see your face
and want to just hold you
in a sweet embrace.
I wake up in a cold sweat
wishing I could just smell your musty sent.
it seems I'll never
see your smile on your beautiful face
hear your voice call my name
for you have gone to another place
while I sit here in
your Space