Okay, yes, sorry to anyone who thought this was a chappy.
Moving past that, reviews have been unanimous (I can't spell today, it's supposed to be the word that means "everybody", but it's six in the morning so eh...) and I have started a sequel!
The sequel is called "Shades Of Gray" (original, right? .:rolls eyes:.) and if you are just now reading this then it is completed and I am working on "Rose Tints Their World" and "Primary Colours". There is more info about those on my profile.
Luvs And X-Rated Thoughts-- Luci-chan