A simple, five stanza poem. Something a bit darker than what I normally do.

My sweet immortal, delicate angel,
Take me away into your night.
Fill my heart with fear and malice,
And cause the ones I love to fright.

My sweet immortal, delicate angel,
Let me see your heart.
Is it broken and bleeding,
Or has it been dead from the start?

My sweet immortal, delicate angel,
My lifeblood is yours as well.
You kiss me with your lips of death,
And I have become another kill.

My sweet immortal, delicate angel,
You have made me into the night.
Your fragile beauty is all I see,
And I will try to love you right.

My sweet immortal, delicate angel,
I have shown you the love, my dear,
That you have shown me.
Death suits you, but do not fear
What comes in eternity.

Critique is gladly accepted.