Mr. Winter

Hey Mr. winter

You are as cold as ice

Lasting scowl in your face

Certainly not nice

You will treat a poor man as a beggar

And a rich man like scum

You do not play favorites, Mr. Winter

In your eyes, everyone is a bum

How can you watch as I fall,

Mr. Winter?

Its seems when it comes to people

You loathe them all

You won't thaw your face

Your grimace still as stone

With that attitude you have,

Beloved Mr. Winter,

You'll end up all alone.

my first poem.reveiw pweez?