if you dont care, just skip this.
this is because i just couldnt part with my reviews... so i put them up here at the end of the story. i know i know, they are in the middle right now. chill, i'll move them to the end when to story ends.
i love my reviewers ::hearts::
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REVIEWS FOR BRUISED --- 30
Tasha West
2006-07-08
ch 7, signed
Hiya!Uh, finally an update! :)Oh you wrote 'slip' instead of 'split' personality, but not unless you meant to write 'slip'...it could make sense depending on how you wanted us to interpret it. shrugs Whatever...
I NEARLY FORGET JUST HOW GREAT THIS STORY IS! The relationship between Mike and Chris is wonderful. I love it!
Bless little Mikey though...aw...
This chapter was way to short though moans and groans I want you to make next chapter longer!
But nonetheless, this was great!
Ciao,
Tasha -x-
FyreFaerie14
2006-06-21
ch 7, signed
I'm so happy you updated, but my heart cries out for mike! aw, poor baby. yes, i realize that he's a fictional character, but feel such pity. i suppose that's a sign of a good writer: making the readers connect and become emotionally attached to characters. Good job...looking forward to more SOON!
Sakru angelqueen
2006-06-21
ch 7, signed
Great story I hope Mike does get some help. There were some minor problems with letter placment though.
shadow
2006-05-15
ch6, anon.
hey. just started readin the story. it was recomened to me by a friend and i was happy i took his advice. the story is great, it flows together and really catches your attention, atleast it did mine. hope you update soon.
catchya on the flip side of the night :)
and i hope chris can draw mike out of his double personality with the good one dominating.
Tasha West
2006-04-30
ch 6, signed
Hehe, some fucking Gollum shit going on there anyway...lol! Great Chapter! I like! I like! Update soon!
I missed this so much...:)
Ciao Bambino,
Frm Tasha -x-
Ink Drawn Heart
2006-04-26
ch 6, signed
He does! Wow, that's so cool. I think I do, too, sometimes, but I dunno. Anyways, luv the sotry bunches! later
Ink Drawn Heart
2006-04-26
ch 5, signed
Aw cute. But this chapter is so... wow, unexpected. I love it!
Ink Drawn Heart
2006-04-26
ch 4, signed
His mom?!?!?!?!?!? TERRIBLE!
Ink Drawn Heart
2006-04-26
ch 3, signed
This story is so sweet. But what's going on with Mike? Dun dun dun
Ink Drawn Heart
2006-04-26
ch 2, signed
Ha, short, and a little funny. It needs to be longer!
Ink Drawn Heart
2006-04-26
ch 1, signed
AW this is a cute story so far and I really like it. Good job. Good details!
FyreFaerie14
2006-04-26
ch 6, signed
oh no...evil Mike came out. i'm glad that Chris remembered not to take advantage of him...can't wait to read what happens next.
Jacey
2006-04-08
ch5, anon.
I want to know what is going on with Mike and the little voice in his head. This is really interesting and I hope you update soon. Chris and Mike are just too cute!
Tasha West
2006-04-05
ch 5, signed
OMFG! I didn't even notice that you updated. I'm sorry!
Great chapter by the way! Mike and Chris are just to sweet! Anyway update soon!
Frm Tasha -x-
Esquirella
2006-03-29
ch 5, signed
WHAT is "living" inside Mike?
FyreFaerie14
2006-03-28
ch 5, signed
yay! they're so cute...even if Mike's mom is an evil crazy bitch...did she make Mike all schizo?
deepcrimsonfeenix
2006-03-28
ch5, anon.
cries and thrashes Slow down! Detail! I want more meat, more detail! This story rocks, detail it!!
Esquirella
2006-03-27
ch 4, signed
His mother beats him and lets him live on the streets? And does he have a split personality?
FyreFaerie14
2006-03-26
ch 4, signed
wah! oh my god! oh my god! of course,k i already knew what would happen since i read your journal but por mike with the abusive mother...Chris can be gentle enough for him...begins to fantasize i should probably go now...but keep it up and good luck!
Tasha West
2006-03-26
ch 4, signed
?OMIGOD? How? That is my only question! I am baffled. Lol. Update soon! Coz I need answers.
Frm Tasha -x-
deepcrimsonfeenix
2006-03-25
ch4, anon.
Hey, pretty good. A little coppy up at the top there, but it smoothed out a bit towards the end. Take your time, hun!
FyreFaerie14
2006-03-19
ch 3, signed
aww, poor abused little Mike. i loved the new chapter. keep it up. YAOI! spaztwitch
Esquirella
2006-03-18
ch 3, signed
Who is this bitch that's beating Mike up?
Tasha West
2006-03-18
ch 3, signed
I like this chapter, tho I am wondering who the woman is and why she's hurting Mike, great job tho! And make sure you update soonish because I can't wait to see what happens next.
Tasha :)
Jayn
2006-03-17
ch 3, signed
I like Chris, his heart is in the right place. Poor Mike though. Wonder who the woman is. PLEASE update!
Esquirella
2006-03-14
ch 2, signed
Uh oh! Talk about being caught between a rock and a hard place!
Tasha West
2006-03-13
ch 2, signed
Aha! That's strange, lol! Lol I don't even know what to say...but I like!
Tasha West
2006-03-13
ch 1, signed
Totally luv this! Yay 4 the first chapter! Great job :) I like Chris -nods- he's luvvly.
Tasha West x
FyreFaerie14
2006-03-13
ch 2, signed
oh...sexy. that mike's kinda devious. heeheehee.
FyreFaerie14
2006-03-13
ch 1, signed
Aw, that's so cute...and tragic. i really like it when characters from one story pop up in others. anways, nice job...looking forward to more from the seductive homeless boy and the outcasted Chris...