You'd never thought I would do it-
but I did.
Laugh now and see where my singleness, the oneness
has gotten me.
Do I sense pity in your eyes?
I'm going into overdrive-
into HIGH gear
for you babe.
Only for you
would I pay this much
for the gas.
First off, I just wanted to say I am sorry for not reviewing others as much I feel I should be. I am just very busy in my first semester of college. .
As for the poem, I am not really happy with it . I like the strength and passion I put in it, as well as the anger. However, I don't feel as if it has any direction to it.
So basicly...not one of my best.
Anyway, keep writing guys!