Oh! Also. And I was thinking, what if I made this episodic instead of trying to follow a basic short story format (granted, episodes is one way to structure a story, but that's beside the point) and devoted a chapter to each character or something? I really like the Narrator and I plan to keep her (a few characters, like Bob [I don't even remember his name really], have been cut) but I find it kind of hard to keep explaining why she is able to observe everything. I can keep her as a first-person doing a third-person narrative, and portray everyone else in just third person, or maybe just first person. Hmm. I just thought of this, so tell me what you think! It might ease the stress I'm having with this story.