Sappy Love Poem (MyOwnBestCritic, another cc, edited by SapphireIris)

another cc: I did most of the rhyming, but MyOwnBestCritic came up with the crappy "swoon" part. i hate that word.

SapphireIris: edited. Not super, but OK. At least it isn't angsty.

MyOwnBestCritic; I heard that!

Face the wind

And see the sky

Pierce the stars

And don't ask why

When all the colors blend

Into the chaos here

Notes and music bars

Leave nothing to fear

When all is said

And nothing is done

We'll just sing

And have some fun

When we'd been fed

And when we drank

There's just one thing:

I'd like to thank

You

For when we danced

Under the moon

And then we kissed

And I did swoon

I went and chanced

A love on us And

I don't miss

Our simple lust

I'd like to thank you

For all this time together.
Thanks.