This I wrote in English because our new teacher (our old one just had a baby) told us for bonus marks we could either A) write a concrete poem or B) write a metaphor poem. So I wrote a metaphor poem, and here it is.


Kill the Moon

Mimic of the sun

False life as in false death,

Shinning dully in the night

While mimicking it's life.

The sun shall kill the moon.
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Its eye faded at its brightest

The only eye of night.

Little faces help it see

Until dulled in comparison.

The sun shall kill the moon.


Your probably wondering what this poem is about. Well it's sort of related to my story Justified Homicide. The sun is humans, the moon is the undead. Not directly related, but close to it.

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