A/N: Hey ppl I no mi speling hasn't been that gr8 an ppl hav been flaymin mi 4 it so i got mi freind chloe (she's an honors student) 2 umm...wat do u call it...oh ya proofreed mi poems so they wil have proper speling n gramar n w/e. also i stoped usin numbers insted of leters even tho it lookd rly kewl. chloe lyks mi poems a lot btw n called them "meeningful n hartbreaking."
Anywai i hope this wil mak mi peoms better.
Now that you've gone away
I look into the blank white space
Where you used to be
And try hopefully
wrists are opened
and the razor is stained an unforgiving red
To fill that void
With a pool
Of glistening crimson
And as surely as I know this pain will never end
I know that you will never come back
No matter how much blood I shed
No matter how many tears
On this dark, cold winter's night
Everything is just an agonizing canvas
Of brutal red
And soulless white
A/N: wow i think ive improoved alot! I hope u do 2! I even made a rime in that last stansa! Thx chloe i luv u soooooo much u hav no idea how much u hav helpd mi. i culd nev erdo this gramar stuff on mi own. If u reeders hav ani sugesstishuns plz let mi no!
(i 4got to ask chloe 2 proofreed the autor's notez but i dont think its rly importtint.)