I wrote the poem so the longer lines are supposed to be read very fast and the short lines read slowly with much pronunciation. I actually like this one.

Hopefully, She Said

so had she said the word "hopefully" in the past

or said some unknown statement after in a hopeful manner

Can you remember when we

stole

your

clothes

And when we wore them with a

plain

black

rose

I swear I never would have

struck

that

pose

If I had known we would put

on

such

shows

And that they'd laugh like all the

large

lost

crows

I wish you'd come and go and

speak

your

prose

You'd never know I'm at my

all

time

lows

We'd watch the sunset and the

soft

white

snows

Now and again I'd see your

small

pink

nose

I used to watch you as you'd

sit

and

doze

I'd listen to your breathing

as

it

slows

Now I cant watch your brother

make

his

foes

Instead he hunts and shoots and

kills

the

does

I wait to see him when he

ups

and

goes

He cant compare to when we

had

our

rows

So now he pays the cash and

sleeps

with

hoes

I wish he'd understand my

ways

my

flows

You have me so much more than

he'll

ever

know

I wanted you where you would

say

oh

no

I sent you up and down and

on

the

"woahs"

You tried so hard- I never

once

did

groan

I knew you liked it but you

had

to

go

I wish you hadn't I still

have

your

clothes