A/N: ya i no i hav alot of awthurs nottes... lolz u dont gett tyred of heerin frum mi do u? hehe jk! Oryginaly (sp?) dis wuz gona b caled "the deadly storm" but chloe thot this tytlle wuz coler. I thinnk they both meen the sam thyng but it duz sownd neeter dis wai!

This cruel wind sweeps me along

Driving the air from my lungs

And the dagger-sharp bone points of my virgin ribs

Are forced straight into my broken heart

It beats once

In a desperate rush of heated blood

And lies still