This is a pantoum, which has a specific line repetition in a weaving pattern. It's not, however, a perfect example of form.


Something Wants to be Written Here


Something wants to be written here

Though I'm not sure what

Its significance is

As of yet untouched


I'm not sure what

My muse has to offer

As of yet untouched

It knows I don't quite see


What my muse has to offer

Some secret image

It knows I don't quite see

What's there


A secret image

I don't know just yet

What's there

Hiding


I don't know just yet

What wants to be written here

Still hiding

Its significance


So what do you think? Honestly, I can never tell if I like this one or hate it. Suggestions on improvement are welcome, so please review!