A/N: i herd soemwere that repetin sertin linez was a gud litterari (sp?) teknicke so i tryed it in this. Also i hav a reel stori now its a fantasi plz reed and revew it! somehow its easeer for mi 2 spel beter in storis than peotry. lolz i dont get itt eithir but PLZ R AND R this AND TEH STORI!!!

Liein inn t3h darkind alli

doohm surundz us al

jagedd shatird poysind glas

covir t3h bloddi assfalt

Itz a canvi5 of deyspar

I wihs t3h pane wud ind

butt it goez onn in2 an

Enfinniteeof pane

uneskapabil

horifick

pane trappd 4 no but brekin fri

itz revishn us al1!!!!!11

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horifick

skatird witbloddy teerz

uneskapabil

horificck

doohm surundz us al

Itz a canvi5 of deyspar

I wihs t3h pane wud ind

butt it goez onn in2 an

Enfinniteeof pane

uneskapabil

horifick

pane trappd 4 no but brekin fri

itz revishn us al1!!!!1!11