this is my first poem on fictionpress so if ya got any tips i'd love ta hear em. i just felt like explaining that i love rain and how soothing it can be.

The chilly air was icy cold,

A mild storm was coming,

The gentle cool breeze blew my hair,

The clouds were black, the rain was near,

I shuddered at the crack of thunder and the echo that followed,

The lightning flashed and let the rain pour down,

Rain droplets hit my face and streaked down my cheecks,

It looked as if the rain were tears from my eyes,

But the cool droplets had soothed my thoughts,

The rain slowly stopped and the storm was over,

I smiled as one last raindrop hit my face.