A/N: This is my first attempt at a freelance/free verse/freestyle/language poem. I have abolutely no idea how to write one...anyone, this is a 'challenge' that a fellow FP writer gave me, and here's my attempt at it.

Any reviews will be appreciated! (That does include flames - flame being yelling at me while telling me what you hate - although I'd rather you not)


Lone Lotus

Lone lotus

Floating in the water

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Everyone envies you

You are beautiful

A pond to yourself

Sparkling water

Gentle willows

The fish do not bother you

Other lotuses do not crowd you

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I think

I am the only one

That knows the truth

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Your beauty

Scares the lotuses

Frightens the fish

Repels the willows

The pond cannot reflect it

You are lonely

You envy everyone else

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Beauty

Is it as good as it sounds?