This is the first chapter. I do not own Romeo and Juliet.
In the beautiful city of Verona, where our story takes place, a long-standing hatred between two families erupts into new violence, and citizens stain their hands with the blood of their fellow citizens. Two unlucky children of these enemy families become lovers and try to commit suicide. Their attempted deaths put an end to their parents' feud.

At the home of the Capulet family, Margaret Capulet looks around for her only child, Julie Capulet.

"Where is she?" Margaret asks, Nancy Jimes, Julie's best friend.

"I called her, but she wouldn't answer, bitch." Nancy replied, grinning.

"Hello Ladies!" A voice called out and a tall young man of about 17 enters the room.

"Oh, hello Paul," Margaret said, giving him a hug. "Are you here to see Julie?"

"No, actually, I'm here to see Mr. Capulet. Is he in?"

"I'm afraid not, but he was going to the country club."

"Oh yes, I remembered my father mentioning that they were golfing this afternoon. It was pleasant seeing you Mrs. Capulet." Paul left the room.

"Where the hell is she?!" Nancy exclaimed, pulling out her phone. "Julie, you better answer." She added as an after thought.

"Did I here my name?" A voice called out, and then, a girl of about 16 entered the room. Her long auburn hair was pulled into pigtails and her big blue eyes scanned the room.

"Hi mom," Julie gave her mother a kiss on the cheek. "Is it okay if me and Nancy go to the movies?"

"I perhaps," Her mother said.

"Great! Thanks!" Julie ran out the door, pulling Nancy along with her.

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