Author's Notes: My second poem. Enjoy.


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Nameless

By Konnichiwa Minna

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As I lay on the luscious green grass,
Depression sweeps over me,
Nullifying all my senses

An unidentifiable feeling surfaces,
Intensifies,
Engulfs my being

And I feel myself slipping,
Slipping into the depths
Of the unknown

In this world
There is no safe haven,
Nowhere left for me

I'm stranded,
Marooned,
And I am homeless

Soon I become
Free of emotion
Free of my soul

I am nothing,
Non-existant,
Nameless


Author's Notes: So, was this poem terrible? Be brutally honest. And give me help and suggestions so that I can fix my mistakes.
So, review. Please.

Konnichiwa Minna

:D