Hi everybody! This is the opening to a new story! It's short I know, but it's going to be a good story!


Darkness, the changing element, has never been the same as other elements. It has many qualities, attack defence and even healing. But now there is one person who will change the coarse of destiny.

In an overgrown graveyard, beside a Church in ruins with ivy on the walls and ravens reeling round above it. A lone figure sits on a tomb, clad all in black, with eyes gleaming red like the fires of hell.

"This is it. This is the end of the world."

Okay tell how to improve. R&R.