A mostly written sonnet, please review.

Eternal Blue

In the blue mist,

Stood two of blood lineage.

They remained hidden amidst.

The green forest foliage.

Worship the Gods forgotten,

Always betrayed by the other.

Forbidden children begotten,

Sing merry to the other.

Overwhelmed: the laughter

Dissipates amongst the leaves.

By eyes that no longer flutter,

In the tomb of Eve.

One born left:

Deaf, blind, and mute.

The other born right;

Blessed in dispute.

The opposed always exist,

In the eternal forest.

Beware the slumbering mist,

Colored blue in jest.